 Just Another Kill, Chapter 10 / The Drugs Don't Work is now online |
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Commander RNVR Group: Commanding Officers Enlisted: 8 October 2001 From: 38.6902N - 89.9816W  |
12 November 2002 - 19:06
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CommanderBond.net is proud to announce the beginning of a new Fan Fiction series. Jacques I. M. Stewart (known around these forums as Jim) gives us an amazing and brutal look into the world of James Bond with chapter 1 of Just Another Kill. You can read Jim's initial chapter by following this link. The file requires Acrobat Reader 6.0 or better.    Somewhere early morning in a hotel room there’s a guy starting to realise that eternal fate has turned its back on him. It’s 2 a.m. |
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Commander RNR Group: Veterans Reserve Enlisted: 3 February 2001 From: Australia |
12 November 2002 - 20:48
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Great to have a 'snatch' of Jim's work online
Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel. Every one sees what you appear to be, few really know what you are.
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Commander RNR Group: Veterans Reserve Enlisted: 22 February 2002 From: New York City |
12 November 2002 - 21:21
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There are two things I love in a novel: witty dialogue and a mood pieces.
While I tend to like my wit warm, this is cold blooded wit, and Jim has done that very well. With the opening the description of the grey weather, followed by not one but two run ins with the blind, JS has set up an excellent beginning to what I am sure will be a deliberately good, chilling novel. There are two things I am sure of: 007 will stay, and so will the effect of Jim's writing. -- Xenobia President, Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Roger Moore
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Commander RNVR Group: Commanding Officers Enlisted: 30 August 2001 From: A secret hollowed out volcano in Sydney (33.79294° South, 150.93805° East) |
12 November 2002 - 22:52
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I think that this is one of the most eagerly awaited creations of Jim by freind and foe alike.
When I have the chance I shall read this and I'm sure he is as good as Benson. 
How ironic that would be. 
 You're born, you take [censored], get out in the world, you take more [censored]. Climb a little higher, take less [censored]. 'Till one day you're in the rarified atmosphere, and you've forgotten what [censored] even looks like. Welcome to MI6 007. |
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Commander RNVR Group: Commanding Officers Enlisted: 2 August 2001 From: Oxfordshire |
13 November 2002 - 10:10
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I can guarantee further eye trauma as the story develops.
 "There was a violent cruelty, a pathological desire to wound, quite near the surface in the man." CBn: So blinded by inconsolable rage that we don't care who we hurt Only James Bond is James Bond. |
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Commander RNR Group: Veterans Reserve Enlisted: 22 February 2002 From: New York City |
13 November 2002 - 20:51
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Ah...the promise of eye trauma...is that to Bond, other characters, or us?
-- Xenobia President, Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Roger Moore
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Commander RNVR Group: Commanding Officers Enlisted: 2 August 2001 From: Oxfordshire |
14 November 2002 - 07:55
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[QUOTE]Originally posted by Xenobia
Ah...the promise of eye trauma...is that to ...us? -- Xenobia [/QUOTE] Oh...we no likey? "There was a violent cruelty, a pathological desire to wound, quite near the surface in the man." CBn: So blinded by inconsolable rage that we don't care who we hurt Only James Bond is James Bond. |
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Commander RNR Group: Veterans Reserve Enlisted: 22 February 2002 From: New York City |
14 November 2002 - 20:33
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No...we likey very much...I am just trying to guess what is coming next.
Perhaps I should simply play blind and let you lead. -- Xenobia President, Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Roger Moore
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Sub-Lieutenant Group: Crew Enlisted: 30 October 2002 From: UK |
15 November 2002 - 10:14
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jim - I just read this and became very engrossed, and that's the main thing. The ennui and darkly brooding elements reminded me of Fleming's passages in that direction, for example, at the opening of Goldfinger. The violence is more graphic than usual too, but that goes with the chilling sense that the story produces. After all, and you make no mistake about this, 007 is a paid killer.
Come on Jim, I want to know what happens in M's office...say...Moneypenny has been the Old Man's PA for a while, maybe HE's the father...actually maybe not...this isn't Alligator after all! Good luck.
I shall not waste my days trying to
prolong them; I shall use my time. |
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Midshipman Group: Crew Enlisted: 4 November 2002 From: Formally London now Australia |
27 November 2002 - 18:52
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This would have to be one of the best written pieces of Bond fiction I have read since "Colonel Sun" which I found to be quite indepth in it's prowse.
C'mon hurry up with the next chapter I'm very eager ;-) Hmmmm...... Very Eager....... that could be a name for a Bond Girl COPYRIGHT !!!! No one steal it !! :-) Favourite film: From Russia, With Love
but For Your Eyes Only has a special place in my heart as it was my 1st cimematic Bond expirience |
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Commander RNVR Group: Commanding Officers Enlisted: 2 August 2001 From: Oxfordshire |
28 November 2002 - 08:25
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Blimey
That's incredibly flattering. Thank you. "There was a violent cruelty, a pathological desire to wound, quite near the surface in the man." CBn: So blinded by inconsolable rage that we don't care who we hurt Only James Bond is James Bond. |
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Commander RNVR Group: Commanding Officers Enlisted: 2 August 2001 From: Oxfordshire |
18 January 2003 - 16:20
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Chapter two is on its way.
"There was a violent cruelty, a pathological desire to wound, quite near the surface in the man." CBn: So blinded by inconsolable rage that we don't care who we hurt Only James Bond is James Bond. |
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Commander RNR Group: Veterans Reserve Enlisted: 22 February 2002 From: New York City |
19 January 2003 - 04:36
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Is up yet, or can we expect it during the week?
-- Barbara President, Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Roger Moore
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Commander RNVR Group: Commanding Officers Enlisted: 8 October 2001 From: 38.6902N - 89.9816W |
23 January 2003 - 05:03
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Chapter 2 is up!
And I must say it even better than the first. Jim, you've done it again. Now I'll be on the edge of my seat until Chapter 3:"Bring Your Daughter to the Slaughter" comes out. (I love that chapter name.) Somewhere early morning in a hotel room there’s a guy starting to realise that eternal fate has turned its back on him. It’s 2 a.m. |
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